OH my giddy aunt. You know how much of a relief that is to here you say you like it? Shit, I thought it was going to be crap. It's been sitting on my pc for two weeks and I wasn't sure if I was going to post because I didn't know if it would work.

I'm so fucking relieved I could eat my own hand out of joy.

I tried hard to give the OCs a bit of flesh. Sure, it made the chapter a hell of a lot longer but I think it made the whole thing better.

Chapter two is sketched out but not really written properly. Give a week maybe :D