Well my first post has gone remarkably well so I will be less hesistant in the future I reckon.
"...I was properly taken by surprise that Wilson died..." Looking at the sentence I am taking a guess that you're from the UK. YAY! Fellow Brit *high fives* (or am I totally off...I did linguistics at university so I pick up on stuff ;0) )
And thanks for the nice comments. That was very much what I was going for. I did start out by declaring that Wilson was dying and the like but I re-wrote with it at the end. It just seemed a bit more powerful and it worked a bit better structurally.
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Date: 16/12/2009 10:24 am (UTC)"...I was properly taken by surprise that Wilson died..." Looking at the sentence I am taking a guess that you're from the UK. YAY! Fellow Brit *high fives* (or am I totally off...I did linguistics at university so I pick up on stuff ;0) )
And thanks for the nice comments. That was very much what I was going for. I did start out by declaring that Wilson was dying and the like but I re-wrote with it at the end. It just seemed a bit more powerful and it worked a bit better structurally.
Cheers for reading XD